Blue Haze

This could certainly go somewhere, and to some degree I really liked your 'easy to read' writing style. However there was nowhere near enough description, or imagery, for me to ...

I LOVED this poem, the way it is written, the subject, and the fact that it is positive. It made me feel good and it gave me good visuals. So ...

Thank you all for your warm welcome!

Thanks heaps to everyone for you critique. Sorry jennafina and snoink but I had to listen to the majority and see if I could improve on this a bit. I ...

Hello, I am new. I call myself Blue Haze, and I come from the land of the long white cloud. I dont profess to be a great writer, but I ...

This is my first ever critique so please forgive any ignorance or error on my part. I really enjoyed this poem, it is incredibly descriptive and you captured the meaning ...

Wow, thanks for your post jennafina! This poem is about the solitude and emptiness that I am feeling in my life right now. I am really pleased that you liked ...

This was my first writing attempt on this site. I have now edited this poem so hopefully it is a little better than it originally was. Thank you to everyone ...